Monday, October 23, 2017

13B – Horror Continues: A Short Story!

There was one rare residential tower named ‘Ursula’ at Bandra sea side which wasn't hammered down by builders for a reason or two. It was a thirteen storeys building with four flats on each floor and not a single resident was ready to leave despite having some rumors about seeing ghosts on the thirteenth floor. Because there was one retired army officer, Mr Singh, living on the 0th floor who looked after maintenance of the building used to rubbish such rumors. It was obvious to predict that thirteenth floor was human-less. But one day Mr and Mrs D'Souza moved into 13-C with their 7 year old son David on the eve of Christmas. They were Goan Catholics having faith in Jesus and hence they decided to move in once they liked the apartment without giving an ear to the rumors. After all they came through a contact of Mr Singh and he was also looking for one gutsy couple to wash away all the ghost stories. Josh D'Souza was a gentleman. He was a software engineer in Patni Computers with a loving housewife and dreamy son at home. He used to go for a morning jog and enjoyed the company of Mr Singh and soon impressed his ex-army colleagues with his fun loving attitude.

It was a foggy morning in Feb when Josh came to jog with a tensed look on his face. He was upset with Mr Singh for an issue and showed his anger publicly. He was saying that some Mr and Mrs Roy moved into his neighboring flat 13-B and Mr Singh didn't bother to inform Josh. He also didn't mind as Mr Singh was a busy person fulfilling his hobbies to taste adventure. But one day Mr Roy broke into Josh’s apartment when he was in office. Josh’s wife, Leena was taking a nap after finishing household work. Mr Roy directly went into the bedroom where Leena was sleeping. She got up when she heard some noise. Mr Roy was removing David’s photos from all the photo frames kept in the showcase at corner. Leena was scared by uncannily striking appearance of Mr Roy in her bedroom. She tried to shout but no one came to help. She was feeling frightened watching Mr Roy laughing continuously at her. She cried for help and requested him not to get into any wrongdoing. She fell asleep dramatically after the moment like someone was controlling her mind and woke up with a sweaty face. First Josh described it as a bad dream but Leena was very sure that it happened and she was considering Jesus as a witness of the wrongdoing. But Mr Singh was a tough person and difficult to melt. He thought that Josh also came to know about ghost stories and rumors and he was also making up stories to run away. He felt unsatisfied once again with the failed attempt to rubbish all the rumors.

Josh never missed once to knock Mr Roy’s door while going out to question him about his inappropriate behavior. But that door was never opened and Josh also forgot about it. But one day Leena went to her childhood friend’s place for a get- together and David was about to wait at home for less than an hour till Josh came back and they had planned to go to an amusement park. But when Josh entered into his hall room he found David sitting on Mr Roy’s lap with a new toy car in his hands. Josh became red from toe to his head. All the anger came back and he got a surety that Leena was speaking the truth. But Mr Roy showed a different personality that day. He listened to each word came out from Josh’s mouth with controlled patience and even apologized twice. He was there to invite Josh and his family for a tea the next evening. Josh too didn't question him more about the incident before and agreed for the tea. Josh, Leena and David went to Mr Roy’s place next day. Mrs Roy was a beautiful lady with blue eyes looking like she was the gifted one. But Josh was felling something fishy in that place all the time. He could smell the polish of the wood which was kept covered for years. He also noticed some white sheets on the furniture. All the frames were dusty and the couple looked same as in photos without a sign of age. Even their cloths were old fashioned like they bought them ten years ago and kept in cupboard packed.  Despite these weird things josh found Mr Roy friendly with a sense of humor. The small tea meeting went so good that they gossiped for two long hours. Mr Roy also invited them at their farmhouse in Lonavala in summers and Josh and his family happily agreed. Their friendship was getting thicker day by day and two months passed in a blink.

It was a sunny Saturday in the month of May when Josh and his family went to Mr Roy’s farmhouse for a weekend trip. The location of the farmhouse was very weird and there were hardly any human beings in nearby area. However, they enjoyed the sightseeing on Saturday and kept Sunday to spend it in bed. But josh heard a knock at the door in night. He checked the time. The Hour arm was just reaching twelve. The sound of the knock increased slowly and it woke up both Leena and David. Josh opened the door to find out what just happened. Mr and Mrs Roy were there with a torch in their hand. They pointed it in Josh’s eyes till he got irritated. He shouted at Mr Roy but he lost his voice in their devil’s laughter. He found it funny but the mad couple didn't even stop to breath. A wave of fear touched Josh’s feet. He looked at Leena. She was already scared and was trying to hide in her blanket. The sounds made by leaves of the trees were contributing their part in increasing fear. She came to remember her very first meeting with Mr Roy in their bedroom in a moment. Josh once again shouted and they stopped within a second. They took chairs and started staring at David with their frozen eyes. They were looking like two statues in chairs. Josh wasn't able to figure out what was happening with them. He saw the phone at side table and tried Mr Singh’s number as he was the most powerful person Josh had ever met. While he turned back he saw David in Mr Roy’s lap. He was going to swear but Mr Singh picked up his call. Josh narrated all the incidents happened in last two months and the current incident which was happening there in Lonavala at a farmhouse far from the city at twelve in midnight. Mr Singh scolded at Josh for disturbing him just for over thinking a rumor. But Josh cried to tell him that it was actually happening. Josh requested to know all the rumors Mr Singh had ever heard about the thirteenth floor.

Ten years ago, Mr and Mrs Roy were living in 13-B in Ursula towers. They were an ideal couple for others like the Wheelers in a Hollywood movie ‘the revolutionary road’. They were friends with everyone and everyone admired them to become a happy couple. But according to their neighbors on the thirteenth floor they had some internal issues and the neighbors heard an exchange of bad words and even a sound of beating by belt. They tried to ask about it but Mrs Roy always ignored such questions smartly. Somehow the residents figured out that Mrs Roy was continuously failing to have a baby and she was having a treatment under the costliest doctor of the city. But one day all things went too far and Mr Roy murdered his wife by accident and then attempted suicide. It was the saddest moment in Ursula. But the trouble started after that when the residents of thirteenth floor started noticing Mr and Mrs Roy in their flat. Some of them who believe in such black world left the building at very next moment. Then the ghost couple tried to kidnap children of other families especially the sons. And not a person touched the thirteenth floor after except Mr Singh who never believed in these stories.

But first time Mr Singh felt different after listening Josh’s story and it was actually happening that time. He took the address of the farmhouse and left Ursula at that moment. Mr and Mrs Roy were still there with David on their lap. Now Josh and Leena came to know that they were on a wrong way and they were actually friends with ghosts. The scariest fact was that the Roy couple wanted their son David. Mr Roy announced in between that Josh could try to call anyone but no one would find a road to that farmhouse. Josh lost his confidence at that moment. He called his uncle who was a priest in Goa. His uncle reduced his tension. He asked Josh to remember Jesus and suggested some verses from the Bible to tackle the ghosts. Josh did the same. He gained some confidence by the name of god and he jumped on Mr Roy. He was really a ghost. He escaped with the speed of light but Josh got a hold on David’s hand. Luckily Mrs Roy also disappeared. Josh figured out it a good sign and they ran away from that farmhouse. They moved into their car and did a mistake to keep David at the back seat. Because Mr Roy came from nowhere and again he got hold on David. This time Josh requested him to leave. But Mr Roy said that they wanted to raise David. They wanted to have all the happiness of having a son like other parents. Josh found it foolish to give their son in the hands of ghosts and he scared them to take their car in an accident and attempt suicide to end all the drama. But it took a dreadful turn when Mr Roy escaped with David in the other car which was being driven by Mrs Roy. But the couple was again in Josh’s car next moment and David was alone in the running car. Josh lost his faith in possibility of survival at that time. Leena was expressionless as the ghost couple were able to control her mind but couldn't capture Josh’s as he was reciting the verses. They made a deal that they could keep David alive if they sacrificed him to grow with the ghosts. Josh was about to lose his control when he saw a ray of hope, a policeman was checking the vehicles on the way. Josh smiled first time in that terrible night. But he soon realized that he wasn't able to see David’s car and Roy couple too disappeared with Leena. He ran away to police and described the situation in short. Police felt that they became successful to register one more case of drunken driver but they thought of catching a psychopath that time. They agreed to search for his lost wife and son when Josh fell to their feet. They kept Josh in Police station and sent a search party. But they failed to search anyone. Josh woke up the next day and the night was still alive in his mind. He headed for Ursula and told everything to Mr Singh. Mr Roy was right about the farmhouse as Mr Singh couldn't find it on the given address and then he lodged a complaint in police station. They directly went to 13-B to solve the mystery and find Josh’s family. All the photo frames in that flat were empty this time. Josh thought that ghosts had taken his wife and son forever but Mr Singh still didn't believe it and he was searching for a way to find Leena. And Josh’s phone rang at that time. It was Leena. Josh took a deep breath. Leena told him that ghosts of Roy couple kidnapped them and they went into unconsciousness. Later they found themselves on Pune railway station and they saw a train to Goa and had reached to Leena’s parents. She even had been to church to pray. Josh felt a moment of joy.

A month had passed to the incident. Josh left the Ursula and was living with a friend. Leena and David were still in Goa. One day when Mr Singh was leaving for a morning jog, he saw Leena and David coming to Ursula. He found it surprising and went to ask about their health. He expressed his concerns for the incident. But Leena wasn't able to understand what he was saying. Mr Singh caught her uneasiness and asked her if she knew about any farmhouse in Lonavala and she said that Josh’s friend was having one and they were even planning to go but never succeeded in their busy lives. Mr Singh was shocked and he again confirmed whether she was there in that farmhouse in the last month. But she simply replied that she went to her mother’s two months ago when David’s summer vacation started. She even remembered him that David said a goodbye to him when they were leaving. He gave them a smile and went. Leena still didn't understand what he was trying to say and she stood there thinking for a second. Mr Singh shouted from far away “Come for a tea with Josh one day. I think he needs a doctor!”

Wednesday, July 19, 2017

The Hidden Thing – A '68 words' short story

My learned friend’s naïve suggestion was to find that thing which is always hidden. I took all the necessary things – rope, stick and water. After hunting for hours in a jungle I reached to a house with broken windows. I could find only messes in all the rooms. Then there was a dark room. Inside I found the thing hanging to a rope, injured and crying – my soul.

P.S.: The above underlined part was the given starting line in a competition in my college and the word limit was 69 words.

Thursday, June 1, 2017

Impact of Social Movements

I was quite impressed and motivated by the Indian freedom fight and Chhatrapati Shivaji's efforts to build his own kingdom for the people speaking same language or following the same culture. Both the movements were revolutionary as they still motivate us and give us some learning based on which we can build the future of India today. But at the same time if you read the History of entire world in the times of Chhatrapati Shivaji or the Indian freedom fight, you can clearly figure out that though many of the countries fought one or many battles on field, they also had to fight with their countrymen belonging to different communities or having a different sets of thoughts or cultures. So most of the European countries had the revolution in their thoughts which later reflected in their literature, science and technology or even in their daily lives. The western countries are always ahead of us when it comes to leaving the bad traditions behind and modernize our thought process.

So the impact of a revolution in our thoughts is huge and India somehow missed it in the process of getting the freedom for our country and we were busy in enjoyment after the freedom that no one even thought that India will be far behind in the growth track in comparison with western countries. In that way the growth rate of Japan is commendable and they moved on so fast from their defeat in the world war two.

So coming back to the point of impact of social movements on our lives or on our thoughts, I would like to applaud the efforts taken by our prime minister Mr Narendra Modi by launching the movements like Swachha Bharat, Make in India, and Startup India. Even we should praise for Arvind Kejriwal's odd-even formula. I haven't yet got into the success or failure of those campaigns, but the impact is still huge. For example because of odd - even formula people of India at least realized that there is a serious issue of air pollution in the city and perhaps their children won't even survive in the city in future. This realization is enough according to me. So once the thought process is revolutionized, the campaigns will get better and better. Same with the campaigns launched by Mr Modi. They will get batter and better irrespective of the acting government or the decision makers because people will lead the campaigns to success further.

One thing I still worry is the negative impact of media as they are still into the blame games and they politicize every other issue. I can guarantee that many in the country got a negative impression of odd - even formula and it was just because of the India media because they portrayed it so. So let there be a social impact first, things will get better with the time.
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Friday, February 17, 2017

Book Review: Private India by Ashwin Sanghi


About the story: The story starts with the Marathi character names and Mumbai which are more than enough for me to read it in one stretch. If I say it is just a serial murder story then it will be an understatement. The story is way better than any detective series on USA TV channels. The story is based on a investigation agency called Private India which is the Mumbai division of world’s finest investigation agency Private on which you will find eight more novels based in different countries.

Santosh Wagh, head of Private India who is neither close to Sherlock Holmes and way better than Indian CID series character ACP Pradyumn has a rocky past. The flashback is not that interesting compared to the story going on. It is even annoying some times. But we have to give credits to both the authors that all the murders are beautifully written. You will start guessing the murderer based on the evidences he left behind. One more very beautiful and mentionable thing about the story is Mumbai is aptly explored and used in the story. The murder victims are smartly chosen and the Private India people can’t easily find the connection between them but the readers know that they have met somewhere or they are connected somehow which will give you goose bumps time to time.

Though the fact that you are guessing the murderer all the time which is very interesting but authors have planned the story such that you will feel shocked from toe to head at the end. The idea of setting up a Private India employee in the story is brilliant and it steals the show. One more plot goes on in the sideline which starts with a bang but ends with a disappointment and you won’t see any need of that plot which may have been placed only to distract the readers or making the main story more complex but it is bearable and you won’t care about it after a nail biting and spine-chilling main story. The introduction of the murderer at the starting of the story is written with such smartness that you will forget the character until its one more introduction at the end of the story which can take your sleep away. The climax which includes the name and introduction of the murderer is not without a doubt brilliant but there is one easy catch in the story in the middle which is not at all considered which will make you a little disappointed. But overall the story is close to be called as one of the best suspense thriller in Indian English literature.

My Review: It may look like the main character of Santosh Wagh is loosely based on the main character of very popular TV series called House MD and Sherlock Holmes. The character of Santosh Wagh’s boss who is the founder of Private has no super powers or he doesn’t add any surprising magical factor to the story. When the plot is at its peak in the end, when the murderer is about to get revealed the story takes a weird turn where Santosh Wagh is attacked because of its past which makes you angry. Apart from these two-three negatives the story is just awesomely thought and smartly showcased. You will get a feeling that the story can’t be an Indian English literature which is the biggest achievement. I was reading Ashwin Sanghi’s book for the first time and I am sure that all his books must be as awesome as this. I definitely recommend Private India to each and every fiction lover.

Rating:  4/5
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